Monday, March 4, 2013

Cheyanne Writing Sample - Doc

This Is My writing sample and we got 40 minutes To completed this and I have posted this how I wrote it  and I am go to reflect  on this at the end of the year and see if I have got  better. I hope you like it

One Day I was getting ready for school I went to put on  my Uniform on,but  It was not
there. So I went to my mum and ask if she has seed my Uniform.She Said yes, it’s in your room ,But it’s not there I said ,so my mum went to my room and look for it but it still wasn't there.I look in my room and in my mum dad room,I was worried because I will be late for school.

My mum said  just go to school and get a dress pass and expand wye you don't have your Uniform and I will try to look for it when you are at school. Ok mum I will go to school and get a dress pass but what will I say, say this I can’t find my Uniform.I got my bag and went out the door I walked to school. I was late I ran to get a dress pass and expand wye I don’t have My Uniform I ran to class.

It was the end of the day I walked home I got in the door and I said Hi mum , And My  mum said Hi. I have your Uniform In the your basket in your  room.That right I Put it in the basket Because I got mad on it.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Cheyanne,

    Its amazing how your uniform just ended up in the basket with mud on it. How do you think your writing test went? Anyway cool story, maybe next time you could proofread it first before you post it on your blog. Keep up the great work.